Cancelled Geola12 Artist Application

[Geola12]

Dol Caranthan Style house - Freebuild

 

[Geola12]

Dol Caranthan Style house updated
Moria Tomb Entrance Plot

 

[barteldvn]

Hey Geola!
Thank you for your application, here's some quick feedback on your two latest builds:

Dol Caranthan Style house:
- Avoid using square windows (e.g. 2x2)
- The bottom floor can be made out of stone as well, just make sure it's a different mix than the walls. (maybe more cobblestone)
- Don't make your rooms on the same floor have different floor materials
- I'd recommend adding more beams, and instead of having them stick out a block, add slabs in between, to make them less big.
- Try covering up your roof with more wood, especially since you got such a big upper floor.
- General rule: If you have the space to do so make your rooms less big by adding supports, different inside materials... this will make them feel more cosy and alive.
- Avoid switching suddenly from chain to rope, it doesn't look so good in minecraft (screenshot of hanging shelf)

Try starting a new fresh house instead of keep on improving the old one.

Moria tomb entrance plot:
- I think your plot is a little out of style with the colours you used. Avoid using such contrasting blocks, especially in Moria.
- Do something with the flat space above your door. Maybe extend your support for the top railing one block down and add a nice curve to it.

Keep on the work!

 

[Geola12]

Mineshaft detailing and collapsing with Ober

 

[Geola12]

Dol Caranthan Style Interior

 

[Geola12]

Start of freebuild dwarven storage hall

 

[Geola12]

Freebuild Storage hall updated

 

[creeperpig0]

Freebuild Storage hall updated
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Any plans on updating this? Your FB storage hall was looking good!

 

[BWOT]

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