Cancelled Norir Artist Application

Norir · Mar 18, 2020

Date: I joined on the 27th of July in 2019
Jobs and Plotbuilds: MORIA: mineshafts (Designer: Dav3ck), OSGILIATH: parts of the camp (tables, Lifts, some shelfs, repaired Roof/balcony, (LeBlanc(/Bruh)Gandalf) OUTSIDE: Various river and street jobs (different Foreman/Designer example: NicovichTheSixth, ooitsbirdo), MORIAWESTGATE: placed 3 stonebuttons (Designer: ooitsbirdo), MORIA: Floor, small pillars on the walls of a tunnel)
Themed-builds: Ship FFA, Orccamp, Castle FFA (can be better now, learned a lot), Orccamp
Additional Builds: Pixel Art (one big Thing), some smaller Things, but Nothing very impressive.
Your interests: I htink i am good in building ships, but more imoprtaint, mordorish/orcish style is very interesting for me
Your motivation: Wanted to be one, since i joined the Server. I really started to build themes instead of exploring and my first themes were really bad but i improoved a lot during the time on MCME and i think i am ready now, to become one of the builders of MCME.
Sincerely,
Norir

Norir · Mar 18, 2020

Also i did some stalagmites in the caves of moria (big and small ones, was with Dave i think, but i am not sure and my harad theme will come in the nixt time, when i have time to finish it

barteldvn · Mar 18, 2020

Hey @Norir Thank you for applying for Artist!

It's up to you to keep updating this application. I will check in from time to time and give feedback when I think it's needed. This thread might help you as well.
For any further questions please write me on discord or the forums.

Good luck!

Norir · Mar 20, 2020

Here are also some screenshots of my Harad theme build

Norir · Mar 22, 2020

Built this crashed tomb in moria (with some advice of Mershy (and bart told me, that a cave troll didn't threw up some stones))

barteldvn · Mar 23, 2020

Norir said:
Here are also some screenshots of my Harad theme build

Not bad, the general esthetic is good, but the individual houses are a bit lacking in some areas:

- Make sure the houses are unique, maybe switch up some of the window designs, (larger/smaller, shutters/no shutters, glass/no glass...), switch up some of the foundations of the houses, or some of the roof detailing (though that's not too bad all ready)
- It's a bit weird to store melons all over the place
- I like the wool covers, but keep them white, or another bright colour, like light blue (fits better in desert climate)
- Would have either added more, or spread them out a bit more, there's no need for it to be that dense, seeing how much space is left.
- With that amount of water I'd expect a fair amount of greenery, maybe some palm trees or water plants and definitely some grass close by the water.
- Why is the path so far away from the village?

Norir · Mar 23, 2020

barteldvn said:
Not bad, the general esthetic is good, but the individual houses are a bit lacking in some areas:

- Make sure the houses are unique, maybe switch up some of the window designs, (larger/smaller, shutters/no shutters, glass/no glass...), switch up some of the foundations of the houses, or some of the roof detailing (though that's not too bad all ready)
- It's a bit weird to store melons all over the place
- I like the wool covers, but keep them white, or another bright colour, like light blue (fits better in desert climate)
- Would have either added more, or spread them out a bit more, there's no need for it to be that dense, seeing how much space is left.
- With that amount of water I'd expect a fair amount of greenery, maybe some palm trees or water plants and definitely some grass close by the water.
- Why is the path so far away from the village?

ok i overworked the most, but it is just a very small "village" and the "houses" are so close together, that they can keep the cold better. so far it is just a small concept for some builds in the far desert of harad. I will try to make them look more different and will send new screenshots the following days

Norir · Mar 24, 2020

Here are also some roads from the job i did this night (23/24.03.2019)

Norir · Mar 25, 2020

I have redone parts of my harad theme (it should be like an outpost in the desert, where people can take a break and refresh from the journey through the desert), but i will send screenshots somewhen else, when the textures are fixxed, because some custum blocks have no texture right now.

Norir · Apr 2, 2020

Today i joined the job with Mershy (Mershy_) in moria to smooth out some rocks and build some walks for orcs in the wall (+some holes in the side to sleep)

, and i am waiting, until the gondor pack is fixxed (some custom blocks in themebuild), also i try to finish the exterior of my tomb probably tomorrow

Norir · Apr 7, 2020

I finished my tomb at Durin's Crossroad (second one), here ar some screenshots

Norir · Apr 8, 2020

And here are the missing screenshots of the Harad TB, it is a trade-Outpost where sellers can store their goods and take a break. Also they are making carpets on the roof and have a raincatcher for water, in the different "blocks" are a few flats in the lower floors and storages and eating place in the upper Floors.

Norir · Apr 11, 2020

Here is my second collapsed tomb at Durins crossroads and i took part in the job with Darki (swampland) and will try to send also other things than tombs in the next weeks, if i can manage it

Norir · Apr 21, 2020

Here is another tomb i did, thanks for the advice to use less different blocks, I will always think of that in the future again when i build tombs. I will also finish something i built in freebuild and send it in here.

Norir · Apr 21, 2020

Here are the screens i announced of my build, it is not a special place in Middleearth, it shows farmland and i made different "spots" for chrop and trees, that it has different structures. Hope you like it and because I made this for the first time, i am open for advice, if I can improove something.

Norir · May 14, 2020

I sent a long time nothing, becaue I was on working on this Castle and I hope you like it. If you want to visit it, DM me. I am also always open for advice .

BWOT · May 16, 2020

Hey Norir, you definitely have improved from the time you started this application. While I think the actual individual components of this castle are visually good, detailed, and well-built... I think the overall layout and composition of everything needs some improvement. I'm going to be referencing many of the newer builds in Anorien as examples when I say this, but the overall shape of your build is slightly weird. Very very compact and I feel needs to be more plain circular. Think of the functionality as well, is there a well for water, enough storage, proper accommodation (beds seem somewhat randomly placed and squeezed in), a place for horses. Maybe you do have some of these elements already however it is hard to see from the pictures. Another thing that I think you should consider is how it fits in with you landscape (which is plain but I mean is well built). Maybe add a moat, or a path, maybe some construction with some stumps close by signalling they just built the place, a wagon outside, heads on pikes. I think with themebuilds its important to showcase that you build feels alive, inside with all the swords and stuff it does, but on the outside which is a majority of your plot it doesn't. Anyway hope this helps and good luck, I think you're pretty close to Artist if you continue improving at this rate.

Norir · Jun 2, 2020

Here is a house, i changed up a little bit (break a wall in the back, completed the one side of the house, extended the living area and did some detailes.
It is not much, but I just felt like i have to post anything and I just finnished this, i hope I can send in some days some screens of the Workshop-place i did for mershy (Mershy_)

Norir · Jun 5, 2020

Here is the Moria workplace i was offered to do, I did it as i imagined and if Daom's version looks kinda similar to it, it is because he copied it. Non the less I hope you like it the way i did and if there is something to improve, just leave an advice here. If you want to see it ingame, just msg me when i am online or visit it at my FB (if you know how to get there). I tried this kind of workplace for the first time and got some advice, but most of the stuff, shapening and idears are mine, although i followed the stuff Daom wrote on signs, what should be in this workplace.

Norir · Jun 7, 2020

I did a job with Mithrilled (hosted by FoolhardyFish) today, where we mixed up some walls in anorien. Also i made one houseinterior as a plot for mith (picture with the small room) and i build over the last days a house in anorien-style in Freebuild (all the other Pictures)

Welcome to MCME!

Joining the server

IP: build.mcmiddleearth.com

Cancelled Norir Artist Application

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