ImperatorFVV
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Today I shall not have the time to give feedback into your builds, but I will say that your interior work is very great, your exterior work could use some work. I noticed in your pics of Formenos that you have a mostly white build, but then you have a single grey structure at the center. It would be better to keep your materials consistent.
As I said above, however, I do not have time to go fully in-depth, I will do this tomorrow.
Some very useful tricks that I agree with and, take for granted I will be applying next time. After all, the building progress consists on learning new things everyday, and you gave me the means to really improve my constructions, so thank you!As promised, a bit more in-depth review of your build:
1. First thing I noticed when I looked around it in the themed build world; you use a lot of quartz pillars. There is no problem with this, but how you use them could be vastly improved upon. The thing is, is that they are all on the same depth as your basic walling, (moss stone, the white brick) try moving them one block forwards out of your walls, you might be surprised by how it will improve upon your build!
2. Your walls are a tad short, I would add 2-3 blocks to their height, this is not a major issue, however.
3. The towers attached to the walls are good, but could be improved upon. They are a bit simple, going straight up from the base. I would try adding supports/struts coming out from each side. If you go to /warp Cair Andros, you can see what I mean. I also noticed the frontal tower has one side an even amount of blocks, putting the flag on top off-center. This may have been a mistake, and definitely remember to be very careful when planning large structures to make sure not to have any even measurements, this makes detailing and building generally much harder.
4. Your roofs are decent, especially the one on the grey house, but your domes could be improved. Cair Andros has some good examples.
5. This is a smaller thing, but I thought it would be useful to mention; inside the main hall, you have those large columns on either side, but there are no proper arches in-between. where the columns reach the roof, there should be an arch connecting across the hall, and on either side. Here's a good real life example: https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/1/13/Porto_-_Catedral_-_Interior.JPG
I hope this has been useful, if you have any questions, feel free to pm me whenever you like, I should get back to you within two days.
Good luck, and good building!
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